Sunday, July 24, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - #3



This is from a novel of mine called Chasing Hope. Enjoy!


Arianna's breath caught at the word love but she didn’t have the capacity to think about that right now. The need to make sure she could keep Aiden was unbearable. Where would she go when they released her? Could their son and her stay with Ethan; the man she'd lost for so long? What about that family she thought he might be keeping at home? These were all questions begging for answers but Arianna didn’t know if she could bear the outcome. 

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28 comments:

  1. Oooo! sounds like Arianna's got *alot* of questions on her mind!!!

    Great six!

    xx
    A.

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  2. Sounds like a very tough place to be. My heart goes out to her!

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  3. A complicated situation, I hope she can manage the answers she gets. Great six!

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  4. Carrie, this is great! So intriguing! I look forward to reading more. :)

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  5. Poor love, she sounds so confused and torn xx fab six, the inner turmoil she's in is clearly portrayed.

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  6. Great six! Thanks for Sharing
    Lyncee

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  7. Poor girl has a lot of questions that need answering. Maybe we'll learn a few of those answers in the weeks to come. Awesome snippet.

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  8. Hope she can work through her questions soon and find the answers!

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  9. Lots of uncertainty in this six! Keeps me interested.

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  10. Whew! All that thinking is a lot of work! Compact way to show all her issues.

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  11. You know the problem with six? It's not enough!!! Ready to read more! Great six!

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  12. Nice conflict! Great six!
    =)
    C.R. Moss

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  13. Plenty of angst captured adeptly in these six!

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  14. I get a good feeling for her inner state. I really understand her pain.

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  15. It sounds like she's got a lot of thinking to do. Very emotional six.

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  16. Arianna's questions leave me wondering...and wanting more!

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  17. Oooh she needs to ask those questions!

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  18. You have some awkward phrasing in there but still managed to convey her worry. Definitely a keeper.

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  19. A lot going on in her life and not knowing what her future holds... great suspense and numerous questions in these six sentences.

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  20. Sounds like her life is in turmoil! Great six!

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  21. Safety before love. Nice to see she has her priorities in order.

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  22. She appears to be in the middle of a complicated situation. I hope thing work out for her. Really enjoyed this six!

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  23. Wow. That's a lot for one person to shoulder--great conflict.

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  24. Goodness, she sounds so overwhelmed! Great six.

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  25. Wow! I'd be afraid of the answers too! Talk about stress! Nice tangle she finds herself in! Lots of conflict!

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  26. She sounds so desperate and in need of a lot of answers!

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  27. Wow, sounds complex! Great six :)

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