Sunday, September 4, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - #9




From my WIP A Taste for a Mate - Book 1 of The Redwood Pack Series. 

Jasper shook himself from his inner thoughts and looked into those hazel eyes. The spot of flour on her cheek begged his hand to brush it way. He fought the urge – no need to freak her out. Her chest moved slowly as she fought for breath. The cinnamon scent of her filled his nostrils and he took a deeper breath that went straight to his cock. The slight gasp that escaped from her kissable lips almost broke his control and he fisted his hands to regain it.

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55 comments:

  1. Does he really need to keep control? ;) superb six.

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  2. You will just have to wait and see Alix! Thank you for coming!

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  3. Go ahead...let that control slip! Love how he is so in tune to everything about her...the way she breathes, the way she smells. Very nice!

    Great Six, Carrie Ann.

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  4. I love his hesitation, here. Great characterization!

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  5. Mmm! l love a man fighting for control! Great six!

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  6. I like Jasper already. Great six today!

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  7. Yummy six! Love the sensory description.

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  8. I love it when the hero fights to keep himself in control. Nice six!

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  9. Can't wait for him to lose control :) Great six!

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  10. So tempting and so ... fisting. Sigh. Adore it!

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  11. Hot six Carrie! Thx for commenting on mine too. Tabooindeed!

    :D

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  12. Nice, nice scene. Excellent writing.

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  13. You could cut that tension with a knife! Great six!

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  14. Ooo I wouldn't mind if he let his control slip. Excellent six.

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  15. Love the tension here Carrie Ann.

    Great six!

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  16. Great use of sensory details. Good 6.

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  17. This six practically slides off my computer screen, it's oozing so much sexual tension. Whew (fans self) Love this.

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  18. Nice tension. I love the build up. Makes you wonder about what will happen when something sexy actually happens. Wonderful six!

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  19. Great snippet and HOT cover. Pure awesome.

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  20. Nice—sometimes the actions we repress say more than the ones we indulge!

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  21. aww..come on..control is no fun ☺
    great six

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  22. So descriptive... I love it! Great six!

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  23. I think he should touch her...wipe the flour, dude!

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  24. Thank you everyone for your lovely comments!

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  25. Beautiful writing - also love your site!

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  26. Thank you Jennifer, it is still a work in promise as I learn but Thank you!

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  27. I don't think he'll be able to control himself for much longer! Then we'll be in for some fun. :)

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  28. I love the line: He fisted his hands to control it. This delivers a great visual here.

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  29. Fantastic sensory imagery. Thanks for sharing!

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  30. I love a man fighting for control.

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  31. Great sensory detail, sensuous six with a bit of suspense!

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  32. Wow! It's a wonder his control hasn't snapped already! A wonderful tribute to his character!

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  33. Loved the tension! Can't wait to read more. :)

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  34. Awesome sexual tension! And love that cover!

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  35. SO sensory; I loved the sexual tension building. You want to say, Kiss Her!!:) xo

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  36. So when does he lose control? Can't wait to read more!

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  37. Control is overrated. I'm sure I read that somewhere. ;)

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  38. Wow, this is tense and hot! Loved it!

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  39. Loving the tension, Carrie! Fab six, loved it!

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