Sunday, October 30, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - #16


Hi Again! My debut release, An Alpha's Path, comes out Dec 5th. Its book 1 of the Redwood Pack Series. Here is just a glimpse into Kade.


          The smell of fresh pencils and wood shavings filled Kade’s nose. The grey stroke of lead on paper looked like a series of lines, but together, they would eventually morph into a building – a home. He planned, he designed, he drew. He was an architect. That was his day job and way of earning a living anyway. Though he loved it and needed the feel of fresh paper beneath his fingertips, it was not his only duty.







32 comments:

  1. Beautifully written as always Carrie!

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  2. Wow, a great way to describe how invested he is in his work. Well done!

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  3. Great six - love his feelings about his work.

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  4. I liked the fresh pencils and wood shavings description. I can almost smell it myself :)

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  5. Wonderful six sentences! I wish you a ton of sales with your books! Happy Sunday and Happy Halloween!

    Stephanie Adkins
    http://stephanieadkins.blogspot.com/

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  6. Wow, now that is love. Beautiful!

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  7. Love the smell detail in that first sentence.

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  8. Great description. Enjoyed your six.

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  9. I loved how you built this scene to tell us about his profession. nice six!

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  10. You really drew me in. xx nice SIx

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  11. Like the transformation from a series of lines to a home. Nice 6.

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  12. awesome way to display his passion for his work! Great six xx

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  13. He sounds very passionate about his work. Beautifully written.

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  14. Powerful insight into his character :-)

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  15. Intriguing - loved the peek into who he is. Good job :)

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  16. "The grey stroke of lead on paper looked like a series of lines, but together, they would eventually morph into a building – a home." This is a terrific image, Carrie! Well done. :)

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  17. I really got into it too - another duty?

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  18. Incredible detail. Pulled right in.

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  19. wonderful description! i was hooked

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  20. I love how we learn more about him. Sensational six Carrie!

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  21. Love the six, love the home, love him. Just LOVE it all!

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  22. Wonderful. (And I hope things are improving some on the homefront.)

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  23. Awesome six! Love this story. :)

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  24. I loved how we saw and could really feel his passion here. Nicely done, Carrie! :)

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  25. Very descriptive and enjoyable to read. Nicely done!

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  26. Wonderful look at this character! And I'm so happy for you - there's nothing like that debut release! YAY!

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