Sunday, April 15, 2012

Dust of My Wings - Six Sentence Sunday #36

Hi All!

I hope everyone is well! Below is a snippet from my WIP Dust of My Wings. Lily just had a shock and isn't too aware of what is going on.




Lily's head ached and her eyelids felt heavy. Her body pulsated and tingled. What was going on? Energy fluctuated through her limbs, shocking them before weighing them down like heavy sandbags. Where was she?
As she tried to move, her body revolted and shuddered.


Thank you sooo much for stopping by and enjoy your weekend!!

21 comments:

  1. Great 6, Carrie Ann. I can't wait for Dust to be finished and published. It's already on my TBR list.

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  2. Great description, Carrie Ann. And nice six. She's lucky she's aware at all.
    How much longer? I want to read this one.

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  3. Nice six. Wonder what's happening to her...

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  4. Such an intriguing six! And a beautiful cover. :)

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  5. Great six! I definitely want to know more.

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  6. Hmm....I'm with Lily and am wondering what's going on. Intriguing.

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  7. Wow, great job. I really felt the aftermath of electricution.

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  8. Ugh, that's a horrible, terrifying sensation. Hope she recovers quickly.

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  9. (A) I'm highly intrigued by any story involving people with wings LOL and (B) very descriptive six - can't wait to read more!

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  10. intriguing 6, I want to know what's happening!

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  11. Great six! It pulled me right in :)

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  12. Yeah, Carrie! How much longer do we have to wait until the Dust settles and we can get it for ourselves? Not fair, but great six.

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  13. You've got me curious and wondering anxiously about her fate.

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  14. Very well done, great description, agree, can't wait to see what happens next!

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  15. Oh, this doesn't sound good at all. Wonder what's happening? Yikes.

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  16. Uh oh. Sounds like she might be in trouble. Intriguing six!

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  17. Love what I've read of this story! Awesome six!

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  18. Very interesting! this makes me want to know more. Well done!

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  19. Ooh, wonder what happened? I'm guessing something pretty mega! :)

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  20. Ooo gosh, what happened to her?!

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