Sunday, April 8, 2012

A Night Away - Six Sentence Sunday #35

Hi All!

Thanks so much for stopping by today! Here is six sentences from my upcoming A Night Away. A Mel and Kade novella set in the Redwood Pack world.


Kade groaned and rolled his neck before he walked into his son’s room. Melanie and he had painted the room in a soft green to match the Jameson eyes and added cream boarders to break it up. Dark wood furniture filled the room, with cream linens covered with frog princes and bumblebees. Stuffed animals of every sort covered the tops of most pieces of furniture. Gifts from his Pack and family who cherished Finn like their own son. He took another step in and realized he hadn’t been the first one to answer his son’s call.

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28 comments:

  1. Nice six. That's how I spell my son's name too. :o)

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  2. Great six, Carrie Ann.
    Now I want to know who's in there with them :c)

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  3. The last line is very intriguing...hm....

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  4. well crafted, I feel surprised too, you're sneaky ;)
    awesome 6!!

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  5. Love your 6, Carrie Ann...
    The description makes it all so real. love it :)

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  6. Great description in these six. Nice! :)

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  7. Hi Carrie Ann..your six always ROCK...and this week was no exception!

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  8. OOOhhhhhh...who is in there?
    Yvette
    yratpatrol@aol.com

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  9. This is great -- I love the fact that the Pack would have a baby nursery like this. :)

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  10. Sounds like something crazy is about to go down. Love the imagery here!

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  11. that's great how wolves are just like any other parent and the room itself is lovely

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  12. I can see the room, great description! But now I'm concerned who was there before him! Terrific excerpt!

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  13. This reads so sweet and poignant! Lovely six :)

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  14. A very sweet six, but I'm curious to know who else is there. Is it Melanie, or another? :)

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  15. If it's not Melanie, things could get tense in a hurry! Nice six, Carrie Ann.

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  16. Nice set up, ease in, rev it up with a mysterious person. Great six!

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  17. Was Kade apprehensive in entering the room because of the colors or did he have an internal instinct with something about to go awry? Mysterious six!

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  18. That was soooo good. Very good desriptions. I could very well visualize the scene. And enough of a tease to make me want to know who was there first. Good six.

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  19. That was soooo good. Very good desriptions. I could very well visualize the scene. And enough of a tease to make me want to know who was there first. Good six.

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  20. Now I need to know who is in there. lol Good Six!

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  21. Sounds like a beautiful room. I wonder who got there before him. Hopefully someone not threatening.

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  22. Intriguing six, Carrie Ann!

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  23. Awesome 6. Now when does this novella come out? I can't wait for my Redwood Pack fix :)

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  24. I can see this so clearly in my mind! Wonderfully written six!

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  25. thanks for the hop ilike the
    cover of the book and then and then i all so like t he to read it and then blog on it for you and then i like the info on the book

    desitheblonde@msn.com

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